Anybody want to hear my new song?

[Draelyc]

It's very, VERY rough at this point, and the vocals are just a scratch track to get the idea of the tune across. Still got a lot of mix work & processing & mastering, etc., to do. Thus, comments & suggestions are needed & welcomed! Thanks!

Chris

http://www.netmusicians.org/index.php?s ... ue=draelyc

It's the new posting at the top, labeled RUFF VOX.

 

[stephen sawall]

I did like the the dual guitar lead. Some of the way you phrased the vocals just sounded weird to me. I would use the the power chords less often, they seem to lose power after coming in many times. Like you said it is a ruff mix.

 

[Draelyc]

I did like the the dual guitar lead. Some of the way you phrased the vocals just sounded weird to me. I would use the the power chords less often, they seem to lose power after coming in many times. Like you said it is a ruff mix.

Thanks for checking it out, mang! Yeah, I do *not* like that vocal take at all ... just wanted to give a vague idea of how the song goes.

I hear what you're saying about the power chords ... will have to try to think of some way to address that ... don't want it to be just repetition after repetition.

Thanks for the critique -- most helpful!

 

[Draelyc]

Anybody else?

 

[Draelyc]

One last bump before I redo it again....