I just realized who your playing style reminds me of: Jeff Waters of Annihilator. I see the similarity particularly in the fast (double-time) part. It definitely reminds me of something off the Never, Neverland album. Cool stuff. I think your bass tone has too much distortion, for my tastes at least. I find that much "fuzz" on the bass tends to make it indistinct, unclear and ends up fighting with the guitars in the mix. This may be a case where "less is more." That adage seems to be especially applicable well when layering distorted guitar and bass tracks in a mix.