Jordon
New member
First off, forgive me for the shitty direct-in acoustic...I've been working on this all day, and I haven't had a chance to head to the studio to track it for real.
I need opinions on the song overall, and the lead in the song. I pulled a bit no-no for me and tracked the lead before vocals were written or laid down. As this is my first serious composition since I was fired from my last band/dropped from the label, I'm trying to make sure this is as good as it can be.
I'm really not a huge lead player, but I'm hoping this conveys some sort of emotion. I'd rather go for that than pure speed.
Tear it apart, guys.
...Now I just need to find a real drummer and a fucking vocalist.
I need opinions on the song overall, and the lead in the song. I pulled a bit no-no for me and tracked the lead before vocals were written or laid down. As this is my first serious composition since I was fired from my last band/dropped from the label, I'm trying to make sure this is as good as it can be.
I'm really not a huge lead player, but I'm hoping this conveys some sort of emotion. I'd rather go for that than pure speed.
Tear it apart, guys.
...Now I just need to find a real drummer and a fucking vocalist.